Saturday, February 11, 2017

Lonely In Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

It gets lonely here in paradise
Surrounded by stars, high above city lights
My spirit's as high as anyone could lift
As I lay on my cloud peacefully adrift
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Daniel Pace
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Tom Allport 11 February 2017

an intriguing poem about a life without consequence.

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Annette Aitken 11 February 2017

I love thought provoking poems and ones that asks questions, as I to have written similar. Enjoyed this read very much. Annette

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Daniel Pace

Daniel Pace

Salt Lake City, Utah
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