Thursday, October 8, 2009

'Lonely Heart On The Line' Comments

Rating: ★3.5

The darkness all around the room,
The cold wind by the window,
Pouring outside the door,
I can see little pieces of water falling from the floor.
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Lindemberg Pereira da Silva
lonely
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Emma Kessler 22 December 2009

I love the 'Lonely Heart on the line' phrase. It is vivid and very well written. Your thoughts and feelings translate through the poem well.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 12 October 2009

An isnghtful and vivid piece of work

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Lindemberg Pereira da Silva

Lindemberg Pereira da Silva

Brazil
Lindemberg Pereira da Silva
Lindemberg Pereira da Silva
Brazil
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