Lonely Girl Comments

It seems a sad poem but I appreciate it

Wow i like that one, it was so..... i dunno just good.

wow this has actualy tuched my heart that i have kept coverd for so long

Heartfelt and earnest writing. Wonderful job.

I don't believe that you've lied about your date of birth. You seem to have a talent. I keep the rating asside (9) to see also other good poems like this. Go ahead, dear

no one is alone even being lonerly the whole world still smiles with you yet painful by the reeks of alienation the nature stilllove you by its silence..............excellent expression of lonliness by the self as when deferred by time, yet tomorrow is the day of hope, sun certainly rise tomorrow to cater to the needs of your warmth, wrouht ingenious,10+, thanks for sharing

As the saying goes there are plenty more fish in that sea (by that 'shore' of yours) , especially if you've not lied about your date of birth. Well constructed verses.

beautiful stanz with very well written with repeated lines...keep writing