Tuesday, September 12, 2006

Lonely Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.5

It doesn't matter how hard i try
Even though i'll be dyin inside
Look deep within and tell me what you find
I just can't seem to hide
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Leo Lopes
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Gabriella Franco 23 September 2006

AWESOME as usual... lovin' it, almost as much as you. great poem. love everything about it. Gabriela

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Steve Hagget 13 September 2006

A lovely poem - beautiful way with words you have and so deeply expressive, Steve

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Anurag Bhardwaj 12 September 2006

That is such a beautiful poem. It is composed with blend of meaningfull words. Specially those lines' I tried to tell you i'm fine but that's a lie I just can't seem to hide These Lonely Eyes'

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