Thursday, October 1, 2015

Lonely Dove Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once I planned to do some HUNT,
So I set out to the forest AFOOT.

All of a sudden, I saw a couple of DOVE
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MUSAWIR RAAKH
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 October 2018

I noticed the alone, took self SINNER, Because I was, her family's KILLER. So I broke my gun, abandoned HUNTING, And no more viewed, lonely DOVE FLYING. very good poem showing your greatness in deciding not to kill..... tha nk u dear poet.......... when everywhere killing is rampant, this poem has meaning.. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 16 October 2015

An impressive and heart touching poem....................................10

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Anita Sharma 02 October 2015

very emotional description. i am sorry for the perished one.gorgeous writing liked much

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Anita Sharma 02 October 2015

very emotive description. i am sorry for the perished one.gorgeous writing liked much

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Liza Sudina 01 October 2015

you have a gun! you are dangerous!

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