Saturday, July 8, 2017

Lonely Destiny Comments

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Grey overcast skies,
flickering yellow lights
I stare at the busy city life
People everywhere, going on their way
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 July 2017

I stare at the busy city life All with a home, Someone to call their own Am I the only one standing all alone No one to kiss, hold tight, in the forest of human beings, i am all alone. Sad poem. But we all experience that. The best way is to smile and give love. Even when we are not pretty or handsome, our smile may attract people. The purity of our hearts will attract others. This is my experience. Be bold, face the loneliness and you shall conquer your loneliness. Believe in God. Tony. God bless u dear poetess.

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 July 2017

An impressive poetic longing. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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