Thursday, September 25, 2008

Lonely Day Comments

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Baby I lay alone in my bed
Thoughts of you run through my head
All the crazy things you do to me
I am so in love with you, cant you see
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Reshma Ramesh
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Randy Hogan 02 April 2009

This poem, I can relate and this poem breaks my heart the most, just makes wish I was a handsome prince so i could whisk you away over and over again...... It make me so sad me Lady so fair and lovely with a heart that warms my world You can never say you are not princes for my heart is legion of one In my dreams you always fly as Angel there i will have to be solace in your beauty I would leave you ten but I done use them all up on you poems all I can do now Is make a wish upon a star my Angel

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Sebastine Humaemo 20 November 2008

i can feel each line while i read....too lovely...guess its me who felt lonely after finishing the poem....

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Rakhi Jayashankar 02 October 2008

nice simple poem....

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Richa Dhodi 01 October 2008

i loved this poem... Used simple words.. but every line as a reader admired me and heaved me to a deeper thought.... nciely written mam

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Kholekile Monakali 28 September 2008

it is such a nice poem if you ask me, I enjoyed the most to read it............! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

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