Monday, October 6, 2014

Lonely As I Am Comments

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LONELY AS I AM


Lonely as I am
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Shalom Freedman
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Kevin Patrick 19 October 2014

Its short, but in only a few words you have expressed in subtle detail a very beautiful meaning for life. If your feeling alone you must be in bad company is a quote from Sartre or something like it. I think what you say about beauty in loneliness is deeply truthful especially for a hermit like me, I feel a freedom to be me that I could never be with a group of people, their is liberation on the path you choose to walk. A marvelous read.

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Khairul Ahsan 06 October 2014

A beautiful poem. Lonely or otherwise, life goes on. And yes, a certain kind of loneliness is sometimes a bliss, and is beautiful too. 'There is so much to love in life' - none would dispute that, I guess. Truly, there is so much to love in life! Very well said! 'And longing for Someone Can mean There is still Hope after all-' - So well said, I can easily understand. But I do not understand the use of capital letters in some words in the middle of the lines. I guess, that has been deliberately done to put emphasis on the words. Is that so?

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Gajanan Mishra 06 October 2014

so much to love in life, I like it, thanks.

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