Wednesday, December 19, 2007

Lonely Comments

Rating: 5.0

When your lonely
I wish you company
When your sad
I wish you happiness
...
Read full text

Kasi Navadomskis
COMMENTS
Jennah 11 July 2018

Lovely poem. A very small correction. The spelling of 'Your in this instance is You're with the apostrophe between the words. It is two words made into one i.e. You are....When you are lonely...The other your' is possessive, representing something you own, as in your poem, your pet cat, your breakfast etc.

2 0 Reply
Howard Johnson 09 June 2008

This is a very beautiful write Kasi, Thank you for sharing

2 0 Reply
Sarah Jane Massie 19 December 2007

very good! you seriously wrote that? !

2 0 Reply
Kasi Navadomskis

Kasi Navadomskis

United States
Close
Error Success