Thursday, September 24, 2020

Lonely Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness is all over the shadow
Loneliness ice my heart
Pleasant days and nights no more
Heart cries header and header
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Ejalonibu Abraham
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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2020

Heart wrenching poem, beautifully conveyed, dear young poet! I like your poems very much. Keep creating/ writing poems Gradually you know the way to all doors here on Poem Hunter, sure. 5 stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 September 2020

A vivid depiction of loneliness. Deeply poignant.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 September 2020

Loneliness burnt my heart into ashes/// oh! the loneliness sometimes you come as blessings, sometime as curse; what'll be mine- where I'm still nothing.......

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Chinedu Dike 24 September 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings... A poignant bit of verse. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Ejalonibu Abraham

Ejalonibu Abraham

Osun state
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