Darkness is all over the shadow
Loneliness ice my heart
Pleasant days and nights no more
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A vivid depiction of loneliness. Deeply poignant.
Loneliness burnt my heart into ashes/// oh! the loneliness sometimes you come as blessings, sometime as curse; what'll be mine- where I'm still nothing.......
Well expressed thoughts and feelings... A poignant bit of verse. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Heart wrenching poem, beautifully conveyed, dear young poet! I like your poems very much. Keep creating/ writing poems Gradually you know the way to all doors here on Poem Hunter, sure. 5 stars.