Lonely Comments

This night is long and cold i need you here.......beautiful loving poem penned......deserves 10+

The bed is cold The night is rough dark The day is scorching light The whole is bitter empty Oh! it's not life; it seems dead alive....o dear without you everything is painful everywhere is dreadful please come come o love

I have nothing to do no words to utter The bed is cold and empty I cant make it warm. expressive of the world lonely........ a fine poem. tony

I cant make it warm I'm alone, where art thou You didn't text tonight I thought you would stop by...i need you especially when it is cold in me.......... thank u for such fine expressions dear poet. love ur poems. tony

Tinashe, such a well expressed poetic feelings...10+++++

Without him near the night seems so long and lonely. Wish he should at least give a call. Nice poem.10+++