Lonely Comments
So it's now come to this
You really have no clue
What it feels like
To wake up cold and blue
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Sobering work that made for an interesting read...If you don't mind a bit of no-nonsense critiquing & it's strictly IMO- the work starts off crisp & smooth, however stanzas 2 & 3 do not flow well. That said, from thereon out(4-12) the piece flows mellifluously like silk on satin...Take a 2nd look & I think you will se what I observed and felt when reading those 2 stanzas....Keep that pen pumping young lady...Talent u-got! ~FjR~
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8/1/2025 7:55:29 PM # 1.0.0
Write comment. Such a nice poem, Angelique. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks