Lonely Comments

Such a creative write.. Keep it up.. Captures the human behavior..... Surrounded by loneliness... True piece..10 +++ Naila

Nice poem... a reader can feel and imagin your loneliness... So true... and so lonely...

i like your poem just wish you would of kept going with it there is alot of potential if you just let your heart let loose and and let the emotions flow. Also thank you for the kind words you left me in the first message, i feel like i am a not that you say i am. Thank you for your kindness.

A very descriptive and vivid poem on loneliness. Your feelings expressed so vividly. Enjoyed.

Well done in your poem So lonely Great Pls comment on my poems

Loneliness and me sit together, waiting for the moon, , , it reminds me a Poem from Akbar Eksir : we were 7 ppl, but the traffic police wrote 8 , he told the truth, cuz God was with us too!

Beautiful poem. I read it for many times. I like it. Thank you for the sweet poem you shared for us.. Ruma

i love it.! when you'd messaged me the other day i was going to be very unfair with my judgment, i guess that is only how i am. but this..THIS! this is just amazing and very captive. with the smallest of words, the shortest of lines, you made something more of a bright beach. you see, you made me as a human realize what i already understood, that every thing which is good, can also be desperate, wishful, sorrowful, and yet-still beautiful in the most unique of ways, keep it up friend...!

Great poem. It's as if you were walking along, looking up and noticed a star, walked farther and noticed a plant in the desert. Continuing on, seeing a cloud in the sky. Loneliness weeps into the ocean of happiness to hide the tears. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

A superb poem on loneliness.Loved.

It is a beautiful poem. It has wonderful imagery and is quite descriptive. Bien!

Very nice, very describing.

Very nice, very describing.

nice poem, thanks for sharing...

Yes, loneliness is an unwelcome companion. Loved reading it.

Lovely Poet....but not so lonely please....

I thought it was interesting how you used Loneliness as a companion. Seeing other people around you who aren't lonely, I understand this poem. Only the friendless understand the true value of friendship. [3 thank you for sharing.

Nice composition.. hear touching lines...

i like the contrast pictured in each line you gave emphasis on the last line making us understand the message vividly nice poem

'A weeping heart in the ocean of happiness' This poem was just so beautiful and so poignant! Almost made me cry.