Thursday, September 20, 2012

Lonely Comments

Rating: 4.0

Be my friend, groaning ghost
I live near endless coast
No one plays around me
I found a way, gazing at sea!
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Richard Jarboe 13 June 2018

You are really never alone. Even inanimate objects move. This world is evil enough to strengthen your soul and that is what this place was meant to do. It's like lifting weights. Take care, ric

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Ketan Hukare 05 October 2012

If you can write so well, you will never be lonely! Well done

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Very deep and allusive...fundamental poetry at its best-i appreciate my time reading it

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Nader Baheri 27 September 2012

wonderful but so sad. you are not lonely.you are right whenever you feel lonely the poetry will be your friend and also every poet here. mercy bocu for sharing i enjoyed it.

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Elena Sandu 24 September 2012

How true! Everything could be a friend, we only need to open and we can learn from them. Beautiful poem, thank you for share!

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Sina Farajzadeh 23 September 2012

Everybody's alone. You may feel my sentence in most of my poems. Loneliness may be a gift for you and I, to make us compose such beautiful poetry. Good luck dear.

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Nutt Hti 22 September 2012

We were born alone and die alone so don't feel lonely. Use your life in helping others and you won't feel lonely no more. AM

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 21 September 2012

Good one, i can smell lots of talents and clever ideas and thoughts in this great poem Also the rhymes are cool and cute well done.

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Zero Ro 21 September 2012

Gaze, mystify, slouch and dull which are indicated in solitary isolation!

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Elena Sandu 21 September 2012

Beautiful written, yes, for me this poem gave loneliess a happy face. Thank you!

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Vikram Basu 21 September 2012

absolutly amazing dear... :) Its so beautiful...

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Aung Si 20 September 2012

whenever I feel dizzy invite the breeze to wash my history whenever I feel lonely remind me to enjoy sad poetry what the wonderful verses.I love so much more than I can say.Well done! ! ! !

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Sunny Rose 20 September 2012

I can very much relate to your poem coz i felt this when i'm lonely i say 10 out of 10

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So Close 20 September 2012

hi...again you made it, its quite fantastic and your words are excellent..i hope poems like this from you.. »so close«

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