Thursday, May 3, 2012

Lonely Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's a damn hot day, and i'm sitting there..
I'm alone, but my mind's else somewhere..
The metre bulb is glowin', there's no power-cut..
I can't imagine how can i resist an 'All Fans Shut'? !
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Abhinit Chute (abz)
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Vijay Sai R 04 May 2012

your poem vividly shows how a girl can create c change in one's life...nicely said in poetic diction

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Johnathan Juarez 03 May 2012

Liked it it was cool bro

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