Wednesday, July 11, 2018

Lonely Comments

Rating: 4.5

How can I explain,
the sunshine that has rain,
the clouds that never disappear,
even when you are near.
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 20 November 2018

(CONT.) 2 - well, it WAS left four months ago; i only need a few days to forget some things. ; ( i'd give ya MY #, but i'm not trusted too much to start up new phone friendships with women. Donald is already tweeting that his wife spends too much time on her phone. i think the Secret Service is going to tap my line. bri (:

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bri edwards 20 November 2018

(CONT.) 2 - well, it WAS left four months ago; i only need a few days to forget some things. ; ( i'd give ya MY #, but i'm not trusted too much to start up new phone friendships with women. Donald is already tweeting that his wife spends too much time on her phone. i think the Secret Service is going to tap my line. bri (:

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bri edwards 20 November 2018

1 – is acute and its real....obviously you forgot to type s h i t t y after real! ! ! OR did you mean it's? ? ha ha i don't suppose your hunger is for hamburger? i guess your 'topics' reflect the mood of the poem. oh, i see i already left a comment! ! (CONT.)

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Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2018

An unexplainable sadness has somehow been explained, in so much as the readers have understood the pain. Hope the clouds have cleared by now and sunshine has smiled upon you. You've been able to touch me with this poem, Elena.

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Bri Edwards 13 July 2018

oops. is acute and its real.....you see it(s) , don't you? ! but, to MyPoemList. bri ;) Do you really feel alone? My answer: pick up your phone! Dial 888-666-PICK up sticks, and... you may find yourself in Not-ALONE-Land. bri ;) this tel. # [i just tried it] is a 'safe' # to call, ...at least today, Friday the 13th,2018.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 July 2018

Clouds have disappeared and sunshine has rain. The hunger gives pain. Effect of loneliness is amazingly expressed in this poem. We hope pain will be healed soon with calmness and love. This poem is thought provoking. Brilliant sharing is done here...10

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