Lonely as I sit here
Drowning in the ocean of my own tears
Thinking of the future near
Looking at dreams shattered by fear
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This is an amazing poem. Your emmotions just flow and your words just sit on air. Great write.
what a amazing whisper from this flower! yeah, i read it like i talk to myself, build my own strength and calling my core to think...yeah buddy keep trying never give up...still we alive keep hunting, keep searching and even u face hard thing now later u will find that give u everything and this really satisfying! ............Listen to ur heart...it is whispering!
Although its different from the way i write..i like this one. Good job =)
I can't help myself to say that it's really so wonderful poem..each word holding the perfect place making way for a clear view to the emotions there. Keep it up: -)
A lovely poem, Only hearts who love and truly care can be truly hurt. Ttrue forgiveness does not take away the sadness but it removes the bitterness. Hatred tends to harm more the hater than the hated We manage to find forgiveness We will find peace again and our tears will become sweet.