Lonely Comments

All good things have an end. To live until one’s own end is unfortunate. The poem says it all. Very good.

very lovely poem indeed, that can touch many hearts.. loneliness can kill a man sir.... and turn him in to a walking corpse.. this is good.... cheers shan

Perhaps the Lord will bless me with a soulmate someday Dad, love you so much! Moo

Alf, A Lovely poem full of longing, full of love which I enjoyed reading. Bob

Your message is delivered with such sweet tenderness that the emotion of loss wells up from the very first line written Alf. For those with a soulmate, may your message bring the importance of patience and loving care before it is too late. I can only say to be loved like this is what we all live for - G-d Bless you... Cindy

dear Alf as u know the previous story of mine...i feel like this poem dedicates me Thanks dear Alf a nice and ever wonderful poem Luwi

after all journey is from alonenessss to aloneness..................a good write.................

This is just beautiful Alf, you have captured the loneliness of losing someone. I lost my husband 2 1/2 years ago and it is very hard to keep oneself occupied and not dwell on the sad side of life. I felt every verse of this lovely poem. I hope it isn't written from personal loss, if so, I do sympathize with you, it is an awful split and as you say there is no-one to give your news too or ask their opinion of something anymore. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

The romantic loneliness is well expressed. Very simply. Without tears and excesses. We all want to reach out to such a person and say, 'Don't worry. We are here to admire the workings of your mind'. Perhaps it helps to know, that even if you are alone, you are not alone in this world.

A very tender and loving write Alf and a lovely tribute to a lifes partner.....10+

Your poem made me realize just how difficult it would be to be lonely as you express the love one shares with another in everyday life. It is beautifully crafted in rhythm and rhyme and your message is delivered so creatively. 10 Karin Anderson

Your poem is brimmed full with tenderness.

Alf this poem is so poignant yet beautiful with a gentle word flow that only you can so effortlessly manage to write. I agree with Henry even a 10+++ cannot do justice to this wonderful piece.

Like a river of flowing gems.....beautiful crisp lines deep in feeling that touch many hearts my friend.....very well composed poem...really does flow so well Alf....great work as always 10+++

Alf as always your poem flows with beautiful words and a real message. You surely are the poets poet. Unfortunetly a ten does not do justice to your poem...keep penning them my friend

nice and touching poem. when souls become one it certainly is lonely.this ara says it all.beautiful 'No-one realizes just how lonely, When ‘we two’… becomes ‘me only’, God loans us soul mates, for a fleeting while, Through His loving Grace…once again we’ll smile.' voted10 surya

to you Alf... don't say no-one now to share your dream or no one to whisper ''i love you''... love is always at the tip of the pen words are powerful than swords, isn't it? ... hearts are to remind bout love love is silently kept in your heart heart never fails to share your love love is nice..don't condemn it.. your poem''lonely' is full of love my gosh i think am lonely too reading this but this is well written and nicely presented so this''lonely'' is not a lonely piece... and to you my new friend goodluck to your works you're a good poet draws love on air...talk to stars and moon cross the mountains and oceans fly like an eagle...roars like lion but your heart undertsands why the pearl is safe in the heart of an angry sea.. your poem is so nice..cheers..grace

i think true love will always find the hereafter, and the love will continue to grow stronger. EXCELLENT WRITE A DOUBLE TEN AGAIN

There's another world for us Alf..............which is the life after death.Hope you could be together again, with your loved ones.Your poem worth a reading.