Tuesday, April 6, 2010

Lonely Comments

Rating: 4.5

Loneliness fills the air.
Sadness covers me up from darkness.
Pain feels so cold.
Where is the warmth.
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nicely weaved emotions..like the way you said those last 2 lines. keep writing, don't let the poetry leave you ever.

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