Thursday, July 30, 2009

Loneliness With The Sunset Comments

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Lonely Sunset

Alone with the Sun
And The suns last rays.
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I like the form of this poem and how the sentences stretch out to the same size from each stanza. Also the sun and sea bring me pictures of the sea and the sun setting and it beautifully describes how lonely you are. Great work! 10 Karin Anderson

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