Loneliness: My Life's Cruelest Irony Comments

I have never been so lonely, sadness keeps me alive. I am lost...now i don't want to be found. I knew exactly, how it feels to be left dying.......my heart has so much to say but who listens........ we listen to you. your poet friends..... creat a world of friends through your great poetic skills dear poetess. you are great and you can attract so many.. believe in yourself........... you are never alone. fight through life. never give up - life is too precious to give up dear poetess. tony

Thankyou ...and surely m gonna read it @Jazib Kamalvi

A good start with a nice poem, Sona. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Sir i editted it repeatedly but it still appears the same 😔 m also confused why so

Thankyou so much Sir @Khairul Ahsan

Although it is a nice poem, there are many grammatical mistakes which you would do well to edit. For example, in many places two words have joined together; please put a space in between. Like, in the 5th line isjust. Make it 'is just'. Similarly, Somethingkills, hearthas, myonly, etc. Please remove all the 'i's where i has been used a word and replace those by capital 'I'.

Your poem has touched me. I know how unbearable sometimes loneliness can be, and I also know that sometimes loneliness is what we crave for; we want to be away from the daily chores of life, the usual hullabaloo, and sit quietly at a lonely place and brood over something that we cannot share with any one. You have clearly expressed your points.

Thank you so much Sir 😊

I have never been so lonely, sadness keeps me alive. Lovely line expressing how much you adore loneliness. A nice debut attempt. Carry on dear Sona.