Tuesday, May 29, 2018

Loneliness Knows My Name Comments

Rating: 5.0

I often think I am special,
So I need my space,
There peace comes and whispers:
'Loneliness is a disease, ' sadly
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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi
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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 April 2022

I fool myself, perhaps space won't I write poems, no one dare listen I write another, they don't get it; I know, I have no reason to live....meaningful expression. Liked this wonderful poem in its entirety!

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 October 2018

nicely penned - I know, I have no reason to live If I can't bestow in other's lives

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 08 October 2018

Thanks once again with you nice comments on my poems

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Brian 01 July 2018

I like what you did in this message by making loneliness a human who teach us that it's a disease and can demage our lives. Nice work

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 July 2018

Thanks once again for your positive comments on my poems...

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Lincoln 27 June 2018

Amazingly written Lungelo, it's so passinate...it's so touching

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 27 June 2018

Thanks Lincoln for nice recommendations..much appreciated

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Susan Williams 18 June 2018

Part 2. The lonely often feel rejected by the world and unappreciated... but for various and often valid reasons, the lonely reject forming close ties with others and the loneliness and sense of rejection multiplies. A poem worthy of pondering and being added to my fav list as well as a ten+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 19 June 2018

Those wonderful recommendations sounds like a bit of musical strings in my eyes...Thanks again

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Susan Williams 18 June 2018

Part 1. You bare the soul in this poem. That title drew me to select this poem to read- not only did it grab my attention, it delivered. I have not often read anything that so caught the essence and the torment of loneliness as this poem has done.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 19 June 2018

Thanks for your positive feedback on this poem.... I strive to live the moment each time when I attempt writing a poem, sometimes weeks or months and/or inspired by a certain moment in one's life such as this poem inspired by one of your poems

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 June 2018

Dear Lungelo, you have so movingly executed this poem on a philosophical base regarding loneliness and life style. Your penmanship in this poem is highly appreciated. Beautiful poem.10

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 15 June 2018

Thanks my friend for your commendations on this poem...

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