I often think I am special,
So I need my space,
There peace comes and whispers:
'Loneliness is a disease, ' sadly
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nicely penned - I know, I have no reason to live If I can't bestow in other's lives
I like what you did in this message by making loneliness a human who teach us that it's a disease and can demage our lives. Nice work
Part 2. The lonely often feel rejected by the world and unappreciated... but for various and often valid reasons, the lonely reject forming close ties with others and the loneliness and sense of rejection multiplies. A poem worthy of pondering and being added to my fav list as well as a ten+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Those wonderful recommendations sounds like a bit of musical strings in my eyes...Thanks again
Part 1. You bare the soul in this poem. That title drew me to select this poem to read- not only did it grab my attention, it delivered. I have not often read anything that so caught the essence and the torment of loneliness as this poem has done.
Thanks for your positive feedback on this poem.... I strive to live the moment each time when I attempt writing a poem, sometimes weeks or months and/or inspired by a certain moment in one's life such as this poem inspired by one of your poems
Dear Lungelo, you have so movingly executed this poem on a philosophical base regarding loneliness and life style. Your penmanship in this poem is highly appreciated. Beautiful poem.10
I fool myself, perhaps space won't I write poems, no one dare listen I write another, they don't get it; I know, I have no reason to live....meaningful expression. Liked this wonderful poem in its entirety!