“loneliness And Longings” Comments

t resounds again and again and my loneliness grows strong and stronger… Tears are falling, oh… how am I to stop the rain that’s falling? When the loneliness I felt was just caused by my longings of you, ...........don't allow your tears to fall else it may bring discredit to you.... lovely feeling and best presentation......10 read mine.........cry not.. teacher's woe...pleasant exchanges...

a rich piece..lovely hmmm liked it 10/10

wow fantastic poem well done aira