Friday, September 15, 2006

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 4.1

I am afflicted by
Loneliness.
It creates a void
Bottomless.
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asma bahrainwala
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Anoop Gururaj 08 October 2006

haha asma ur really good well i must say honestly this ones better than mine but... i took like 5 mins to write mine lol j/.k really good i like it better than mine

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Prasanna Kumari 19 September 2006

u made me drown in loneliness, asma.i am breathless now

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Preeti - is here! 19 September 2006

Asma, i love your style, even if i don't read the poet name, i know its you by the way its structured. even the style lends a certain personality to this poem, loneliness is the worst thing a person can go through, like Tracey said, get a frined, or hum hai na PH wale :) Preets

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Brian Dorn 15 September 2006

Asma, a purposeful write that many can relate to... making it all seem less lonely. Well done! ! Brian

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Tracey Collins 15 September 2006

get a friend they can help U threw your loneliness......

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