I am afflicted by
Loneliness.
It creates a void
Bottomless.
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Asma, i love your style, even if i don't read the poet name, i know its you by the way its structured. even the style lends a certain personality to this poem, loneliness is the worst thing a person can go through, like Tracey said, get a frined, or hum hai na PH wale :) Preets
Asma, a purposeful write that many can relate to... making it all seem less lonely. Well done! ! Brian
haha asma ur really good well i must say honestly this ones better than mine but... i took like 5 mins to write mine lol j/.k really good i like it better than mine