Loneliness! Comments

Love you Sat... Wonderfully melancholic... seems like you are talking for me... very well written as always....

great great write, , , loved it, , ,

Your art pours like a fine wine. Thank you for the honour of sharing with us.....it would be a pity to keep it all to yourself: -) So lovely.

I could sense your emotions a great and wonderful write......................keep writing always :)

'I abhor to be all alone by myself Like an old bottle stood on the shelf' Strong immagination and rhymes Which kept me reading. I hope you stay on the shelf Looking silently on everyone Who wish to drink your inner wine.

I like the part about being alone.

You are the phenomenon. Vivid images, sad yet strong tone and a neat breakout of stanzas. Simply amazing and I just love it. Ro’ya

quite good the starting of the poem seems to have carried it till its ending

Just rub my eyes to see clearly, ....... Loneliness is finally to find us in crowland we dwell....as you may think it is blessing sometimes and part of healing for sick man.....it grows to development, indeed, we usually find some corner in seeking tranquility.....well done Doc.....10+++++

Saadat, you make me smile and cry at the same time. smile, due to your style and choice of words, cry becuase you speak of a universal feeling that we all go through at some point in life. However, the true meaning of life we learn in those moments of utter loneliness, when we realise the only partnership one has is with Him. lovely write Mamta

'Speak and tell me How to live Seek someone who is there to give surely someone better than me must rub my eyes to clearly see'....nice poem dear friend..

surely someone better than me must rub my eyes to clearly see Ah, I felt the sadness in this poem for the lonesome life that we may all lead amidst the crowds... even though solitude can be bliss too.

'every time my silhouette says How shall we both pass the days' Find the desire within your heart. and reach for it. You will find you are not alone. And the lonely feeling will soon pass. If you smile for life...life will smile back. Enjoy all you have and what you desire will soon come to you

I could feel the emptiness deep down; excellent write!

every time my silhouette says How shall we both pass the days Lonely as ive been for years now not knowing the where or the how Now that my shadow too has gone the dusky grey has left me forlorn Wept an cried but zilch in return My heart and soul hurtfully burn What would be? As the time flies shall I let bye gones be byes Speak and tell me How to live Seek someone who is there to give surely someone better than me must rub my eyes to clearly see

oh...such a touching deep heartfelt words..wonderfully expressed...

A nice poetic piece which i felt in deep. Wonderful way of expression.

loneliness.....i believe god gives time and space both for us to sort out our lives and problems..there are instances of loneliness, when one is amongst own people too.very, well written. ritty

LONELINESS AT ITS BEST... WONDERFUL PIECE..10 UP.

Melodious and touchy loneliness 10