Sunday, December 23, 2007

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

This loneliness
I feel inside
It makes me think
Of suicide
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michael douglas hamby
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Sonny Rainshine 23 December 2007

Though it doesn't help much, rest assured that loneliness and grief are a part of being alive. I've certainly had days when I felt just the way your poem so vividly expresses. We all deal with these things in our own way, but I have learned two things: 1. Everything changes. Tomorrow things will get better. 2. My loneliness and sadness assures me that I am a person who can feel things deeply, both good and bad things. Merely platitudes? Maybe, but platitudes have their worth too. A wonderful poem came from your emotions.

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This Kid 23 December 2007

great writing, and I know how that feels. gave it a ten.

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