Loneliness Comments

I think poetry is a great way to vent feelings, and you've done just that, Jessica. It takes courage to be vulnerable and you have courage to admit you're lonely, not feeling great. 'Most men (and women) live lives of quiet desperation, ' and most if not all of us have experienced the pits. Some won't admit it, you did. Your wording could use just a little work, like the first sentence should read: 'Loneliness is such an empty feeling' Keep up the honest writing, and I hope you find a really good friend who you can bare your soul to and enjoy good times with. Thanks for the poem.