Looking out my broken window,
I saw people together,
While I walk alone,
With only my own as family.
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Very, very touching Alex.... I actually feel your pain. Always, Linda
VERY VERY nice. I like it so much it inspired a poem I've written.
Very moving poem, Alex, as is all your work. Straight from the heart. I liked the twist at the end, it added to the poignancy. Don't be too down hearted, though, I'm sure your sincerity will find its match.
amazing poem alex i can also relate to this poem because when i was younger i was very lonly i had not one friend and i sat alone to eat my lunch and i was watching all the other kids in my gread have fun and play games with eatch other and i wanted to feel loved like that.
i think this is a great poem it comes from the heart of lonelyness...and honesty!
Alex your poem touched my lonely soul......awake to reach out to you..... So bid goodbye to lonesomeness will you?
This is a nice one. I enjoy reading it.