Tuesday, May 15, 2007

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 4.4

Looking out my broken window,
I saw people together,
While I walk alone,
With only my own as family.
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the poet
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toruk macto 21 September 2008

This is a nice one. I enjoy reading it.

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Linda Weischedel 23 December 2007

Very, very touching Alex.... I actually feel your pain. Always, Linda

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 12 October 2007

VERY VERY nice. I like it so much it inspired a poem I've written.

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Peter Stavropoulos 19 June 2007

Very moving poem, Alex, as is all your work. Straight from the heart. I liked the twist at the end, it added to the poignancy. Don't be too down hearted, though, I'm sure your sincerity will find its match.

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Sandra Wiebe 15 June 2007

amazing poem alex i can also relate to this poem because when i was younger i was very lonly i had not one friend and i sat alone to eat my lunch and i was watching all the other kids in my gread have fun and play games with eatch other and i wanted to feel loved like that.

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Fred Johnson 25 May 2007

i think this is a great poem it comes from the heart of lonelyness...and honesty!

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Malini Kadir 15 May 2007

Alex your poem touched my lonely soul......awake to reach out to you..... So bid goodbye to lonesomeness will you?

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