Thursday, September 11, 2008

Loneliness Comments

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Some say that loneliness is only a state of mind
but for me, it is 24/7-it is reality
and one day true love is what I hope to find
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Bernard Ceasar
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Monika Marie 18 September 2008

Loneliness can become reality to the ones that are only showered by the unprovoked abysmal. The sad part is, once it's a part of you it's rarely difficult for it not to become your reality again. You're pain can be your inspiration, like I, and that inspiration has turned you're writing into radiance. Great poem!

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Ameer Mcarthur 17 September 2008

Your loneliness will be remedied once love comes showering on you!

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Tanya Stanford 12 September 2008

I can so relate to this one. Even had me smiling from guilt while reading it. Lovely

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Bernard Ceasar

Bernard Ceasar

Marion County, South Carolina
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