Friday, December 9, 2005

Loneliness Comments

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Loneliness is a ticking clock
Inside an empty room
That echoes round inside your head
And you feel just like a tomb
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Philip Vincent Sanders
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Cynthia Aluning 09 December 2005

Very nice poem. It described the negativism of life on the first sentences and ended up to a brighter view. To some extent, only when u feel alone, that's the time to recollect and reminisce things back... or plan ahead. Silence seems defeaning, only then we can think of what's life has better more in store for us or what more harm it will do on us, depending on how we treat each and every situation that come and go...leaving the memories of sadness and welcoming days ahead with a glee. That's why our eyes are placed in front for us to look ahead than backward. Keep writing, u do it so well.

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Philip Vincent Sanders

Philip Vincent Sanders

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