Monday, February 25, 2019

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 4.7

I struggled through that long wormhole to the other side
into a dark cavern that gaped so deep and wide.
Fearfully I leant against the dank wall of that black hole
and felt the coldness of loneliness flooding my soul.
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Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker 26 August 2022

Lonliness is such hard feelings!

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Shadrach Shehu 24 August 2022

A poem that tells the story of salvation. Great work!

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WIlliam Jones 23 August 2022

Great poem. Makes one think

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Chinedu Dike 23 August 2022

A message of hope, a wonderful creation. Congrats on your poem's selection as member POD.

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Kim Barney 07 March 2019

Very Nice, Yor. Congrats on poem of the day!

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Khairul Ahsan 07 March 2019

A nice poem on feelings of loneliness in an adverse situation. Love the rhyme and rhythm of the poem. 'Overwhelmed by the solitude of singularity I felt cut off from the world of love and reality. What alternative universe lay ahead I could not tell. All I could do was hang in there, in that wretched place of.' - A vivid description. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Rebecca Navarre 07 March 2019

Awesome! .. Ever so moving! .. Beautiful, beautiful message! .. Praise and Thanks be to our Lord! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ......................+++++ And ever so much Congratulations on poem of the day! ..

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Lyn Paul 07 March 2019

An incredible story with an amazing outcome. Wonderful to read. Also your Poet notes. Thank you

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Susheela Shiju 07 March 2019

oh beautiful! ! congratulations for being selected as the POD!

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 March 2019

Arms opened wide! ! Today being alone. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 March 2019

A beautiful poem on loneliness and how in His company it vanishes. A well rhymed, sweetly flowing poem. Enjoyed thoroughly. 'Now I travel the road to a heavenly destiny and because He walks with me I shall no more, lonely be '... is so nice. Shows the your profound faith in Him. Thanks for sharing and Congrats.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 March 2019

He came to me arms opened wide, and stood there next to me. Reaching down He then lifted me from my gloom and misery. Now I travel the road to a heavenly destiny and because He walks with me I shall no more, lonely be...... very good. thank u for the poet's notes. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 March 2019

A great turmoil of thoughts caused due to utter loneliness and introspection leading to the light of His majesty and benevolence have been beautifully portrayed in this poem. Congrats on the well deserved poem of the Day.

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Aqua Flower 07 March 2019

Congratulations on being selected. This inspiring write gives solace to the feelings of loneliness!

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M Asim Nehal 07 March 2019

A wonderful poem, nicely written.

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Edgar Bonette Clar 07 March 2019

inspiring poem, very much

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 March 2019

beautiful poem with lovely belief walk walk alone dissect and discover the self no ego; devastate its root by the stormy wind of JESUS belief ...........////

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Prabir Gayen 07 March 2019

Very beautiful poem to be selected.....thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 March 2019

An inspiring and uplifting poem of the day. Congrats, Yor for being picked......

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Susan Williams 03 March 2019

I enjoyed the story within this poem. And your message speaks eternity. What better message could a poem bear?

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