Friday, June 23, 2017

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

A shudder running up my spine
without reason nor any rhyme
a constant process I confess
reminder of my loneliness.
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cheryl davis miller
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Richard Wlodarski 27 June 2017

Cheryl, your poem is so well written that it compounds the loneliness that I feel. Somewhere in there is a huge compliment! Congratulations on a well deserved Poem Of The Day!

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Lyn Paul 27 June 2017

I hear your thoughts. Fortunately I enjoy my own company and have written, Alone But Not Lonely There are so many social groups from gardening, writing and walking. Powerful poetry. Thank You

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Marcja Gelsa 27 June 2017

A poem of excellence so good.

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Rini Shibu 27 June 2017

Your emotions well expressed in this poem...Congratulations Rini

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Rini Shibu 27 June 2017

Your emotions well expressed in this poem...Congratulations

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Roxanne Dubarry 27 June 2017

Dearest cherly, You may be lonely, but you are not small. Many poets live a lonely life. I can see your beautiful picture of you looking at yourself on your desk top's computer screen. It was a heart breaking poem!

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Roxanne Dubarry 27 June 2017

I love your poem about loneliness. I guess many poets live a lonely life. I can see your self photo thoughtfully looking at your desktop computer's screen..

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 June 2017

My loneliness! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2017

Loneliness is painful, there is no muse in life. So nicely it has been depicted in this poem. It may be quoted.. . This loneliness I cannot bear I'm reaching out, no one is there so I begin to then withdraw attempting to become so small. Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Allport 27 June 2017

a sad poem of a place that no one wants to be and yet it will happen as to you and me and everyone else at sometime in their life? .................wonderfully written

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Rajnish Manga 27 June 2017

An emotional upheaval resulting out of and brought to fore by a streak of loneliness. Thanks. where are the friendships I thought true? Hands to hold, and ears to listen

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 June 2017

Congrats on being chosen, Cheryl. You may visit my BATHE YOUR HEART, TAKE TIME TO THINK, and LIIVE ANOTHER NEW DAY... Thanks👍

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Rae Seagull 27 June 2017

Beautifully expressed. I like your closing lines the best

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 June 2017

Well-expressed emotion of sadness.... Rated 10++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST and EACH PASSING DAY... Thanks, Cheryl👍

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Light Water 23 June 2017

So sad this poem feeling lonely.

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Captain Cur 23 June 2017

To lonely to feel lonely, With these thoughts I do agree, Sometimes a one man ship Is the best of company.

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Aakash Nengroo 23 June 2017

where the answers i once new... where are the friendships i thought true? life is unfair and we are left to ourselves somtimes but thats what makes us learn the best lessons of life...n thts wat makes it worth living... i invite u to visit my poem salvation and a dream...

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