When you are in the midst of darkness
Where loneliness engulfs your soul
Twinges of hopelessness felt
Chirping sound of crickets heard
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open the windows of your heart! a lovely invitation to enjoy the world created for man --- top marks
Hundreds of shimmering fireflies The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet... this is a wonderful poem dear Rini and a great graphic too.
I think I have read this wonderful poem before. Still I find it fresh...a timeless piece
Happy New Year to you, dear, all the best and great Blessings to you in 2021.
I have clicked on the FIVE Stars, and that did! Where are you now, dear Rini, we are missing YOU. Such a heart touching poem. Excellently done. Best wishes from The Netherlands, Sylvia Frances Chan.
Hundreds of shimmering fireflies The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet moon in darkness. it is your call to shine....... lovely. tony
like a shining moon in the darkness, the poet spreads light
The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet....// beautiful poetic expression; superb poem
Beautiful poem it is.The real happiness lies in the loneliness.
toooooo excellent a poem from the renowned poetess its beyond my competence to comment hte moon the stars and you how in loneliness can live all of you
" And you are the shining moon in darkness To spread the light around." This is such a beautiful thought never thought about it quite that way. It's true when we feel darkness, we have to remember we are the moon, the light.
I have read this time and again: beautiful poem, but you have to handle this yourself, you are your own companion together with all the nature that is surrounding you, the most important thing here is, you have to tackle that problem (IF loneliness is a problem) yourself. Marvelous poem, Rini! A 10+++++++ for voting and rating.
This is just so beautiful, love the whole scene you paint outside. Yes, we must come out and observe the beauty that surrounds us, and this will disperse our loneliness. Giving you a big 10+
So true one is never alone, just look around you and you will be amazed. Excellent poem. Tango.
hi dear poet i would like to open my heart for you if the loneliness will be left from you. it s nice poem thanks
Sometimes we are not as lonely as we think we are. We just need to open our euro what's around us!
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