Tuesday, May 16, 2017

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 4.7

When you are in the midst of darkness
Where loneliness engulfs your soul
Twinges of hopelessness felt
Chirping sound of crickets heard
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Rob Lamberton 26 March 2023

Sometimes we are not as lonely as we think we are. We just need to open our euro what's around us!

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Rob Lamberton 13 July 2023

Eyes

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Rob Lamberton 17 January 2023

I like how your poem on loneliness turns into a solution!

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KAVIN CHARALAN 05 February 2021

Bravo beautifully written poem

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Susan Williams 24 January 2021

open the windows of your heart! a lovely invitation to enjoy the world created for man --- top marks

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Dr. Antony Theodore 19 January 2021

Hundreds of shimmering fireflies The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet... this is a wonderful poem dear Rini and a great graphic too.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2021

I think I have read this wonderful poem before. Still I find it fresh...a timeless piece

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 January 2021

Happy New Year to you, dear, all the best and great Blessings to you in 2021.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 January 2021

I have clicked on the FIVE Stars, and that did! Where are you now, dear Rini, we are missing YOU. Such a heart touching poem. Excellently done. Best wishes from The Netherlands, Sylvia Frances Chan.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 November 2020

Hundreds of shimmering fireflies The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet moon in darkness. it is your call to shine....... lovely. tony

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Suresh Kumar Ek 03 September 2020

like a shining moon in the darkness, the poet spreads light

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 June 2019

The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet....// beautiful poetic expression; superb poem

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 22 June 2019

Beautiful poem it is.The real happiness lies in the loneliness.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 June 2019

i still commented on LON LI NESS Hope you will like it RS

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 June 2019

toooooo excellent a poem from the renowned poetess its beyond my competence to comment hte moon the stars and you how in loneliness can live all of you

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Luz Hanaii 28 May 2019

" And you are the shining moon in darkness To spread the light around." This is such a beautiful thought never thought about it quite that way. It's true when we feel darkness, we have to remember we are the moon, the light.

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C F 26 February 2019

Vivid images pile on top of one another, very nicely written verse.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2019

I have read this time and again: beautiful poem, but you have to handle this yourself, you are your own companion together with all the nature that is surrounding you, the most important thing here is, you have to tackle that problem (IF loneliness is a problem) yourself. Marvelous poem, Rini! A 10+++++++ for voting and rating.

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Luz Hanaii 09 February 2019

This is just so beautiful, love the whole scene you paint outside. Yes, we must come out and observe the beauty that surrounds us, and this will disperse our loneliness. Giving you a big 10+

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Tango 14 November 2018

So true one is never alone, just look around you and you will be amazed. Excellent poem. Tango.

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Chaminda Pushpadewa 10 November 2018

hi dear poet i would like to open my heart for you if the loneliness will be left from you. it s nice poem thanks

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