Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Loneliness Comments

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If you feel, you're at a gloomy prison
Your breath coming out so hard
The full sensation of suffocation
When you make sense
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Hamid Moghaddasi
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Osazee Dankaro 17 May 2017

Hello Hamid, please check out my poem Lonesome Sleep. Your poem needs plenty of work if you ask me, as you have not really hit on your subject Loneliness.

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