Friday, November 4, 2016

Loneliness Comments

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When the winds are blowing
And the leaves are rustling,
Sits a lonely near the window-pane,
In that temple of nostalgia where the forces lean.
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Haritha Nair
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Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Beautiful rendition of words embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation elegantly brought forth with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Haritha and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 August 2017

In that temple of nostalgia, mocking, pungence, chirping, vengeance. Truth is the loneliness which seems to be false. a very good potrayal of the mental state.. loneliness can be killing. but getting out of it is necessary and one should try for it by winning friends. smile, laugh.. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Haritha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 04 November 2016

life lies in truth, truth lies in life, good self.

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