Loneliness Comments

What is the tone of this poem? Please reply as soon as possible. Thanks

This piece could have been written without stacking the lines to make it look like a poem, and it would look and read like prose, with a few metaphorical phrasings that make it outstanding prose. Does stacking pieces of sentences in a column make writing a poem? Given the amazing musical possibilities of language, this work seems under-achieving and over-rated.

In its own. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.