Saturday, June 13, 2015

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 4.8

Better to be alone than in bad company
Said the wise man to me
The sultan of saints broke his silence
When strengthened seven times in speech by O Lord thee
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Ayman Parray
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Nosheen Irfan 04 February 2016

The number seven is used quite frequently which must have some significance for you. Very honest write. There's no cure for this loneliness of mine...let it stay if this loneliness can produce such beautiful poetry.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 January 2016

Better to be alone than in bad company Poem with a great message.

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Ayman Parray 24 January 2016

Thanks, dear Akhtar Sahib.

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Ramesh Rai 24 June 2015

Its beautiful and nicely penned.Thanks for share + 10.

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Ayman Parray 25 June 2015

Thank you Ramesh, for taking the time to read and appreciate.

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Aisha Rehman 22 June 2015

Loved your piece. But I think we are never alone. Thinking itself is a human being. All the best :)

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Ayman Parray 23 June 2015

Thanks, Aisha :) Our thoughts never leave us alone.

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Clarence Prince 19 June 2015

Loneliness can be very terrible, but it is better to be lonely, than to be with someone that making you sad!

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Ayman Parray 20 June 2015

Well said Clarence. Loneliness can be terrible indeed but it can also open paths unseen...

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Loaded with lonliness. One of the cires for lonliness is aimply being a friend to ořhers

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Ayman Parray 15 June 2015

Well said Howard. Sometimes loneliness is the friend. Sometimes everyone is a friend. And yet sometimes I stand alone before the Lord of mercy with nothing to show for but my sins. I am glad I am in the company of poets, gives me enough time for introspection. Thank you my friend.

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Kelly Kurt 13 June 2015

There is indeed a form of loneliness that no crowd can spare. It can erode you from within, or speak to the divine) Or both) Magnificent writing, Ayman. It has been ten days since I last saw a new poem from you but it was worth the wait Peace

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Ayman Parray 14 June 2015

Dear Kelly, your one review and encouragement are worth a thousand. Thanks a lot sir. 'Peace from the Lord most merciful'

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