Friday, April 11, 2014

Loneliness Comments

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Loneliness is the colour of a blank sheet of paper.
It looks like the last leaf on a tree in Autumn,
And sounds like wind whistling through a winter forest.
Loneliness smells like damp ground after a heavy rain fall,
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Julianna A. Laplante
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Julianna A. Laplante 06 May 2014

Thank you John. :) I hope I get more support in my life but even as life becomes brighter, I still cannot write anything that isn't depressing. If you look at my other poem... it is the same.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 April 2014

Welcome to PH. This is your first poem posted here and it is very nice. 'It feels like no matter what, no one will ever love you.' - This one sentence expresses loneliness quite well. I have a poem titles 'A Solitary Flower'. If possible, please read it and say a few words as feedback.

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