Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Loneliness Comments

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Loneliness
Were those not the eyes that once looked upon me?
Were they not the lips that whispered sweet promises to me?
Were those not the arms that once comforted me?
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Shanika marini Paul
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Steve Ricketts 27 December 2013

How very sad. Thank you for sharing this poem. Although I felt nothing but sadness, there seem to. E so much hurt and love begging to be taken back to a better time, . You write such lovely poetry. Steve.

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Shanika marini Paul

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Colombo, Srilanka
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