Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waxen dreams
Forgotten days
What does my life mean through
These gloomy ways?
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Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

This is a powerful write. Bien!

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Patricia Grantham 08 October 2013

We all need to be alone sometimes but not all the time. Humans depend on the love for one another. Without it we will surely fade away. Just like a baby need their mother and father at birth so do we need love. A good write.

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Marvin Brato 01 October 2013

Succinct poem, portrays perfect melancholy!

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Goldheart Bird 23 September 2013

Great poem. Yes I agree Cassandra, your never truly alone! Give it a 10! :) Goldheart

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Cassandra Jasmine 22 September 2013

Everyone enjoys time alone, but, as the previous two comments said; we are never truly alone. Great poem, my friend. Cassandra

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Shraddha The Poetess 19 September 2013

actually we feel that we r alone bt we r not..as for eg. love of ur family, , our talent, , our frnds r always wid us may not physically bt mently...they r........... nice poem agn...bhaiyaa.......

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 17 September 2013

sometimes we should stay alone But we are not Remember!

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