Thursday, December 25, 2014

Loneliness Comments

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I traveled alone
Through a thorny path
I could not moan
On disgraceful wrath
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2018

My travel will remain Like the travel of time My innocence is a sin My life is crime.......a fine potrayal of feelings...... life is full of smiles and learning to smile is an art then everything will be positive.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Poetic Breath 26 May 2016

Such a nice poem thank you for this poem

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Yasmin Khan 25 May 2016

Yes, most of the time we feel like this, quite alone even among crowd. Last lines tell the reason of loneliness.

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Lorraine Colon 25 December 2014

I traveled like a moon, from dawn to noon...... sad words, deeply felt. This poem is well expressed and touches the heart.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 25 December 2014

ling alone is the secret of life and wonder in this universe. This is realised well. Very nice poem shared on.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

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