Friday, December 23, 2011

Loneliness... Comments

Rating: 5.0

It engulfs me in it's cold embrace,
My soul, my very being cosumed by despair,
Silence beckons me into the abyss,
Lost and alone I wander aimlessly,
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 26 December 2011

Brilliant stuff man, well written poem with great word choice.

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Smoky Hoss 24 December 2011

Superb living Beauty resides in these words, well done.

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Silentpoet Grl 23 December 2011

A beautiful poem - i can understand the feeling of loneliness you described it very well- but i like the hope you have written amongst the darkness it leaves me wondering ... This is truly a stunning write.

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