Monday, January 18, 2010

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 4.3

A lonely flower in a field
A lonely child does not yield
A lonely star in the night sky
A lonely man gives up to die
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Debbie 24 January 2019

Add a comment.I love it

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Alisha Ford 27 October 2013

i love it! ! ! its beautiful! :)

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Alisha Ford 27 October 2013

i love it! ! ! its beautiful! :)

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M. Akogun 15 June 2012

I cried when I realized how true this was.

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Serena Taylor 08 May 2012

Wow totally luv it! ! :)

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Harindhar Reddy 10 November 2011

This poem is crafted and drafted well. I enjoyed this short poem and stood in boundless amazement at writers way of depicting the neglected things in the life. Hats off to the poet! I wonder if could see my poem on similar theme for its contrasting style :) :) :) Jingle-jangle! Mingle-mangle! A SINGLE RAT in Human Shirt Weeps in bingle!

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Tasha Scott 01 November 2011

I really like your poem! ! ! !

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