Tuesday, October 11, 2016

Loneliness Comments

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I always wonder; why am I so lonely?
Is it because I am clumsy,
Or is it because of my lack in confidence?
I always live life in silence.
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MNSRAlyssa Bii
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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2016

An insightful depiction of loneliness and sadness occasioned by depression, well articulated and nicely brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. A good portrayal of loss of sunshine is in deplorable life at its lowest ebb. Thanks for sharing Alyssa. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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