Sunday, October 8, 2006

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 2.2

Without love and in emptiness
crawling like a snail
like a shadow always behind.
When the time is infinte
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Anoop Lokkur
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Daniel Tyler 08 October 2006

Very clever, your best yet. You are getting even more poetic and the phrasing is superb. By writing shorter work, you make ever word count.

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Asma Bahrainwala 08 October 2006

'oh loneliness! you are my only companion'.....an interesting juxtaposition.. i too hv a poem wid the same title... asma..

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Ashish R 08 October 2006

Well said.Your short poem does make its point clear. Ashish.

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Ashish R 08 October 2006

Well said.Your short poem does make it point clear. Ashish.

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Anoop Lokkur

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