-lone Wolf- Comments

Your poem is a delving probe into the human psyche and what drives some males and individuals. The wolf is actually a very socially organized animal with the dominant alpha male and female in a social hierarchy, but wolves have had a bad rap for centuries. I did the wolf preying upon victims lines also in 'A Season Of Growth', a viking epic, which is not on line. Enjoyed the read.

wow...wat a wonderful poem ^^

i like this it is well written with the same style of writing that i use so i like it and can relate to it even more. tell me if im wrong is it about love or hate cause im thinking its about love for some one but you dont want to love them but your heart says other wise im i right? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? i like it though it reminds me of what i wrote in ''WHEN LOVE FAILS'' when u get a chance check it out and tell me what u think of it.

yea, , , , , , , , , good poetry.. write toward the light.

very well written & i love it, keep it up.10+++

Interesting original poem very done in the shadows of our minds+++++10 regards

really cool poem, where did u get the idea? ?

A nice reading poem with striking images and an unusual perception.' lone wolf' waits within the depth of (human) existance and in its animalistic hunger waits for its prey to devour! But in the end the narrator vividually expressed 'Lone Wolf' human characteristics. Thanks for inviting me to read your work-this poem is noneless than a 10

Beautiful! ...A beautiful piece....trully loved to read it......Winnie

Great job on the poem. The wolf is my favourite animal. :)

Amazing poem! ~Dave~

This is AMAZING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! How'd you get the idea of writin this? -Alex

Impressed I am as well. A poem with such depth usually requires for its inception considerable life experience. Great reading. H

this is really really good..... no matter how much hate he has he has his true deapest feelings

Agree entirely with Linda's comments, and we Capricorns are seldom wrong. Cheers, Jerry

WOW! When I was your age I was still on rose are red violets are blue! LOL This was a very deeply penned piece for a young person such as you. Bravo! God Bless you Capricorn! I am one too! Great minds think alike, just years apart that's all. Linda

this reminds me of beauty and the beast. and the story is just as deep and moving. a ten

I really am stunned with such a great poem I like it very much good job^^ keep writing i give you a 10++++

What a wonderful imagination you have to create this beauty of a poem.....excellent work 10++++

beautiful poem.wondrful imagination. voted10 surya