Monday, August 24, 2009

Lone Sparrow Comments

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I'm only a tiny sparrow. Here cast upon a house top
in the dead of winter. I look down upon the bleak
snow. Not a sign of food. A seed, a crumb, even a
delinquent bug, from it's nest of shelter. None for the
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JOE POEWHIT
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Mark Nwagwu 28 August 2009

a sparrow in winter will suffer indeed, out of its warm habitat of habit. We are often like this poor sparrow, thrown out of our habitat, searching for morsels here and there only to feast on a leftover from a past repast. good write, Joe

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 August 2009

Your write made me to visualize the whole thing.

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Rakesh Bedi 24 August 2009

A nice poem with beatiful flow, joe!

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Patti Masterman 24 August 2009

But Sparrow: if you should fall, He will not fail to notice it....(smile)

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Carol Gall 24 August 2009

lovely write joe .................

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