Thursday, January 1, 2015

Lone Small Tree Comments

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One lone, small tree standing in the sunlight in
front of a wall, it's shadow crawling over limbs
bending to get over it.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 01 January 2015

What a marvelous poem! It's not a haiku technically but it has the virtues that make the haiku so popular, that is, the poet limits the length and faces the challenge of expressing herself concisely in a striking image. You have that striking image in the tree sending out a branch over the confining wall to touch the free air beyond it. It's a sma; ; triumph on the tree's part just as this haiku-like poem is a small challenge for you. This poem refreshes in its honst simplicity.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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