Thursday, November 23, 2006

(((Lone Robin))) -Tanka Form Comments

Rating: 5.0

My baffled heart is
Nestled in between your hands.
A scared lone robin
Within your winter's embrace;
...
Read full text

reinalie jorolan
COMMENTS
Sandra Fowler 30 November 2006

Sometimes brevity has its own charm. Lovely work, reinalie Warm regards, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Roger Bowman 29 November 2006

I thank you too.... Roger

0 0 Reply
Melvina Germain 28 November 2006

A poem to heed, when one places their heart in someone else's hands, that person becomes vulnerable. They are allowing their heart to be in harms way, giving their power up. Your poem sends a very important message, thankfyou.----Melvina---

0 0 Reply
reinalie jorolan

reinalie jorolan

Ozamiz city, Philippines
Close
Error Success