Thursday, February 10, 2011

London Bridge Is Falling Down Comments

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I'm sick of these clouds
That are always over my head,
I can't fight them,
For I know they are right.
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Kim Jones
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ANGEL RAQUEL 10 February 2011

Hello, Kim. Interesting how you perceive this period of your life as a tide and yourself as a wave that is trying to make its way through. It is a powerful metaphor and as a reader I am left with a sense of hope; waves flow ceaselessly...Best of luck with your writing.

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